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Contribution for The Sunday Challenge #424: Abandoned

There are several things to consider when trying to photograph and illustrate some concept. First one should ask oneself whether the output would bring up the concept without any title and caption. For example does this image in any way illustrate the concept of something or someone being abandoned?

The choice of subject alone matters. If one would choose some small item, then it could just as well be an item lost, but not abandoned. So, one could assume that bicycle is an item too big to become lost. Unless the owner suffers some sort of situational or medical memory loss.

Then the context (surroundings) should support the concept. Supposedly negative space (empty street around) can support the message. At least I hope it make the viewer to "feel" the emptiness, and then maybe also the feel of solitude, and also something that is left behind and abandoned. To use that empty space I particularly left the photography until Sunday morning, because then there would be less other bicycles standing around, and no people and traffic either.

Also the way how the subject is placed can support the message. A bicycle knocked down may look more abandoned than a bicycle standing upright. I actually took a shot of another bicycle knocked down on the ground. But I finally decided to upload this for the challenge.

The overall state of the item can make it look abandoned as well. A brand new bicycle would probably look less likely an item that becomes abandoned. Whereas an old, tire flat, and worn-out bicycle may become abandoned because it no longer works.

Finally one can try to use some photography and post processing methods to support the message. I chose to shoot in black and white in purpose, already on the camera, to make the bike and space look more "abandoned". But that was not enough. By increasing the contrast and making especially shadows dark, I tried to "underline" the message. I also added vignetting to put the bike in the "dark", and away from the "light" (street behind on top left).

But then there is the real story, which is somewhat impossible to illustrate without words, especially on a still image. This very bicycle has been there for months. If one looks carefully, one may notice the heavy lock attaching the bike to the lamp post. So, obviously the bicycle has been valuable enough at some point of the time. The way how it stands there is actually caused by me. Two to three months ago I moved the bike to this side of the lamp post, because it was sort of on the way. But I also wanted to make sure the bike would not become damaged any more by snowplows or street sweepers.

So, the question is, does this image alone make one to think that the bike is abandoned? Very likely not. But at least one can try to send that message with an image.

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20 comments - The latest ones
 Diederik Santema
Diederik Santema club
Quite a story you told here. For me this is just a bike with a flat tyre which is parked and secured to the world so it can't be taken away easily. My citybike is in a far worse condition, so the chance of being stolen is about the same as winning the lottery.
For me is counting how long ago it was parked there? What is the condition? How much dirt? Is it usable (with minor repairs)?
A car is also abandoned when the driver steps out of it. But that does not mean the driver did that for the very last time.
5 years ago.
Sami Serola (inactiv… club has replied to Diederik Santema club
Exactly thoughts that I was going through when trying to choose a subject for this challenge. Abandoned house is more obvious. And you did actually well! At least for me a half sunk boat immediately looks abandoned. Although, in case of wooden boat it can be done in purpose, to make the wood to swell.
5 years ago.
Diederik Santema club has replied to Sami Serola (inactiv… club
The Dutch village of Wilp must be abandoned for the day because of the dismantling of a V1 bomb from WW2. Also the adjacent motorway is closed. Also abandonment. nos.nl/artikel/2326277-bewoners-zijn-vertrokken-bom-langs-a1-kan-worden-ontmanteld.html
5 years ago.
 Gudrun
Gudrun club
The flat tyre signals abandoned to me! The deserted surroundings and the bw add to the impression. I wonder that the bike is still complete, in our town the wheels would be stolen by now;-)
5 years ago.
Sami Serola (inactiv… club has replied to Gudrun club
Thank you, Gudrun =)

I suppose that bike model and parts of it art not worth to take. Especially when there usually are plenty of better bicycles around.

But this has really been there for very long time. Six months at least.
5 years ago.
 Jan
Jan
you clearly put a lot of thought in to this picture Sami and I like the choice of black and white to add more detail.
5 years ago.
Sami Serola (inactiv… club has replied to Jan
Thank you, Janano =)
5 years ago.
 Chrissy
Chrissy club
die Gegend sieht auch etwas verlassen aus
5 years ago.
Sami Serola (inactiv… club has replied to Chrissy club
Ja, und deshalb habe ich mich für diese Aufnahme am Sonntagmorgen entschieden. Am Werktag sind immer Leute da. =)
5 years ago.
polytropos club has replied to Sami Serola (inactiv… club
Do you speak German?! :-O
5 years ago.
Sami Serola (inactiv… club has replied to polytropos club
Unfortunately not. I only find it polite to provide direct DeepL translation sometimes. Although, I am very aware that it can be risky ;-)
5 years ago.
 Clickity Click
Clickity Click
Certainly gives the feeling of being abandoned! :)
5 years ago.
Sami Serola (inactiv… club has replied to Clickity Click
Thank you, Chris =)
5 years ago.
 Boarischa Krautmo
Boarischa Krautmo club
no front brake - and a lot of thoughts.
5 years ago.
Sami Serola (inactiv… club has replied to Boarischa Krautmo club
Front brake is for cowards! =P And yes, sometimes it is fun to write nonsense think aloud =D
5 years ago.
Boarischa Krautmo club has replied to Sami Serola (inactiv… club
;-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
5 years ago.
 Wierd Folkersma
Wierd Folkersma club
well thought, I thought about b/w too, but it felt better in color
5 years ago.
Sami Serola (inactiv… club has replied to Wierd Folkersma club
Thanks, Wertti =)

Well chosen colors can underline the message as well.
5 years ago.
 Diane Putnam
Diane Putnam club
Abandonment, yes, and the somewhat seedy nature of the surroundings adds a lot to that feeling.
5 years ago.
Sami Serola (inactiv… club has replied to Diane Putnam club
Thank you, Diane. I am glad to hear that it worked for you, at least =)
5 years ago.

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