This is what the painting looks like now. I'm sure you would not see the difference from the last one, but I kept seeing things that needed to be corrected.

The hearts in the background shows my love for him and the 2 hearts linked by the side of the signature shows that we are linked together - the younger and the older generation!

We can learn a lot about light here, as there is a lot of lighting contrast and joining the light with the shadow by half tones is not an easy task. Your feedback is welcome.